Damp and Drear…
…but above freezing so not slippery.
Here’s a poem I came across yesterday. Apparently a number of well known poets were asked to take a Taylor Swift song as a starting point for a poem. Since I don’t know Taylor Swift from Adam, I don’t know what song served as the prompt for this, but I think “Creation" is a mighty fine bit of writing.
Creation
Dean Rader
And on the eighth day, God
was totally done with the haters. Nothing
but complaints about acne, mosquitos,
unripe fruit. Where’s my house? Where are my
clothes? What’s with the serpents? And so
God did not bless the eighth day. And
she did not rest. And she did not
see that it was good, in part because
God’s boyfriend told her to clean
up the areas around the swamps and
make more mountains. His best work?
An asteroid. Whatever. Has he even seen
the firmament? She nailed it. Beaches too.
And lord the animals. They never shut
up, but she doesn’t mind. They are hers.
And the color of the sky? She invented
that. Same with fire, but she’s saving
the good stuff for later: rain, earthquakes,
ice storms, lightning. Wait till they hear
thunder. Now, that’s godly. A reminder.
At the present though, it’s all judgment,
all critique. Nonstop. And rude. Everyone
thinks she is getting it wrong. But wait
until they hear birdsong, wave wash
leaf lilt, wind rush, river run. She made
the howls of wolves, the bristle of cicadas,
the puddles of rain, and all the cries. And she
made the sounds of sticks and teeth and tongue
and stone and skin and mouth and bone
and sea and roar and wail and call and
clap and sigh and gasp and moan and
mew and chant and chirp and purr and
trill and hum and laugh. She is making
music. That’s what they don’t know.
But they will. Because everything is
moving, everything vibrating in one
great dance that is the act of becoming.
Let there be light, and there was light. She
will put behind her the darkness of day eight.
Tomorrow is day nine. She was born to create.